Mystery Ahead, July 2016 | Dialogue Secrets, New Emilia Cruz, Africa Spotlight |

Published: Thu, 07/14/16

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This is Mystery Ahead, the new webzine for readers and writers. Together, we find out what makes for a compelling mystery.

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Crackling dialogue is a mystery essential. It can seem effortless to readers, but writers know it’s hard to create verbal ping pong. Here are 3 ways to do it:
  • Create competing agendas. Make characters joust or talk past each other.
  • Characters can't speak in a vacuum. Use setting to influence the conversation. 
  • Plot out the trajectory. Does the dialogue start out happy and end up angry, or vice versa? If introducing a clue, where in the dialogue will it appear and how does that timing influence the interaction of the characters?
Best source for dialogue inspiration? Anything by Raymond Chandler.

#friends
DV Berkom, author of the Leine Basso and Kate Jones thriller series, stopped by the blog last week. Her books have been topping Amazon’s category charts lately and I’m impressed with her ability to write two series at the same time. Here’s what she said about developing her complex yet relatable characters:

“Perfect characters are {yawn} so boring. I don’t want to invest my precious time reading about someone who can’t do any wrong. How is that compelling? Strong, flawed women are all around us—you just have to look. And let’s face it—nobody’s actually “perfect.” A bit closer to home, my mother is one of the most fearless women I know, as is my sister. 

“I believe that we’ve all got that strength inside us, and I love to tap into the character’s reserves to find out what she’ll fight for and what she won’t. It’s a deep well.”


#reviews
A DEATH IN THE FAMILY by Michael Stanley is a deeply authentic visit to Botswana, hosted by Detective David “Kubu” Bengu of the country’s Criminal Investigation Division. The novel stands alone but if you like international culture wrapped up in a mystery, I recommend the entire Detective Kubu series. 

Kubu, which means “hippo” in Setswana, Botswana’s native language, is an apt nickname. Alexander McCall Smith, author of the Number 1 Ladies Detective Agency series, perhaps the best known books set in Botswana, would describe Kubu as “traditionally built.” The book even opens with Kubu’s dream of eating an enormous meal. 

The murder of Kubu's father, the suicide of a government official dealing with mining licenses, and a tribal debate over the expansion of a Chinese-run uranium mine happen in swift succession. With a little help from an American consultant, Kubu pronounces the suicide as murder even as the tribal chief decides whether or not to allow the expansion. Unknown to the chief, his son has made a deal with the Chinese. The son gets unemployed youth on his side by plying them with cheap beer in shabeens—the local bars. When the chief finally opposes the expansion at a town hall event, violence erupts. 

Despite multiple open cases, Kubu is sent to New York for an Interpol conference. His trip perfectly captures wintry New York City through the eyes of someone who lives without snow, skyscrapers, crowds, or constant urban abundance. He didn’t want to go to the conference, but it yields critical clues to the mining drama at home. Kubu may be a product of a small country, but he knows how to find the wider context.

At times the narrative is a bit slow, Kubu is admonished too many times for sticking his nose into his father’s murder investigation, and I guessed the connection between Kubu’s father and the Chinese mine far earlier than he did. These nits are forgiven because I really admired how the novel demonstrates the critical issues facing Africa today: unemployment, corruption, violence against women, tension between traditional authority and the laws of the state, and China’s growing investment and influence. The issues are handed deftly and naturally; they are simply part of Kubu’s landscape.

As a reader, you are caught up in the tension between old and new. You feel the chief's bewilderment as he tries to navigate the modern world by relying on ancient customs. You march into the Chinese compound with Kubu, and realize that a fiefdom has been seized that will be hard to reclaim. 

A DEATH IN THE FAMILY starts as a murder mystery. But ends as a snapshot of contemporary Africa that should be mandatory reading by anyone travelling to or studying the continent.


#booknews
You heard it here first! KING PESO, the 4th Detective Emilia Cruz novel, will be out next month!

18 August – Kindle ebook release
30 August – paperback release

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Ron Hignite, author of The Devil’s Damsel, asked me how to interest film makers in a book, given that the Detective Emilia Cruz series was optioned for film. Here’s my answer: 

“Build a social media following, especially on Twitter where many agents and film folks routinely post movie and film industry updates. A website that clearly describes your books, with references to setting and characters so that a visitor can visualize how it would translate to film, is also essential.


“As you build your author platform, be thinking about how your series is similar or different to what is already out there on film. Write out what audience it would appeal to if the books were made into a movie or TV series and then find out what social media platforms that audience uses. Target your ideal audience with posts and hastags that will help you connect with influencers.


“Above all, make sure your books can compete with others in its genre in terms of quality of writing, formatting, and cover design.”



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Until then, keep reading and keep exploring the mystery ahead :)

All the best, Carmen

P.S. Mark your calendars for the 18 August release of KING PESO, the 4th Detective Emilia Cruz mystery! Don't forget to vote for the blue or purple background!