Mystery Ahead, Nov 2016 | BIG deal! | Dark Deeds | Dueling Jesse Stone

Published: Sun, 11/20/16

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You are the first to know! An official press release or statement is likely in another few weeks.

US television network NBC Universal has purchased the option to make a television series based on the Detective Emilia Cruz mystery novels, including CLIFF DIVER, HAT DANCE, DIABLO NIGHTS, KING PESO and the collection of short stories MADE IN ACAPULCO. The contract with NBC Universal supersedes my 2015 contract with director and screenwriter Emily Skopov, best known for her work on Xena, Warrior Princess.​​​​​​​
At this early stage, NBC Universal has yet to release project details. Nor do I know who they might have in mind to play Emilia.

While I'm as anxious as the next person to see what will happen next, I keep thinking about television shows based on mystery series such as Spenser for Hire and Bones. Cross your fingers that Emilia, Kurt, Silvio and the rest of the cast will share the small screen with great shows like that!

For more about the Detective Emilia Cruz series, click here.

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Canadian mystery author Sandra Nikolai has just released DARK DEEDS, the 4th book in her series featuring ghostwriter Megan Scott and investigative reporter Michael Elliott. The books are narrated by Megan, a likeable woman whose life was stable and normal until her husband turned out to be living a double life in the first novel, FALSE IMPRESSIONS.

For Sandra Nikolai, the first paragraph of a book is the one she has to absolutely get right. She recently wrote, “Opening paragraphs should hook or invite the reader to visit the world of the story. The imagery conveyed should paint a picture that stirs a reader’s curiosity, wonder, and emotions. I’m all for achieving effect, so I’ll spend time revising the opening paragraphs until I’m satisfied that the reader will want to read more. . . . The decision regarding the content can also be quite subjective. I prefer to keep it simple and set the tone of the story.”

In her case, each Scott/Elliott novel opens with a hint of foreshadowing. Here’s an example from FALSE IMPRESSIONS:

“If I’d known I would be visiting the morgue just weeks after I saw my husband sitting with Pam at Pueblo’s Café, I’d have gone over to say hello that sunny Monday afternoon in July and maybe change destiny. But I was late for a five o’clock appointment.”

After a first paragraph like that, you have to keep reading.

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In addition to writing great first paragraphs, Sandra weaves--to use her own words--ordinary characters into extraordinary, life-threatening situations, using the premise that evil often lurks in familiar places. Here's a bit of a recent chat.

Carmen Amato: What was the first book you read that marked the transition from reading kids’ books to grown-up fare?
Sandra Nikolai: When I was a young teen, I read The Diary of Anne Frank. The story touched me deeply because I imagined myself in her situation during the Nazi occupation. It brought home the realization that not every young person has a carefree youth and that some pretty bad things can happen in this world.

CA: You can invite any author, living or dead, to dinner at your home. What are you serving and what will the conversation be about?

SN: I’d invite forensic anthropologist Kathy Reichs, bestselling author of the Dr. Temperance Brennan series on which the program Bones is based. I’d serve lasagna with a tossed green salad and a bottle of Chianti. Nothing with bones! We’d chat about her books and Montreal—a city we both know well. I’d wait until we’d had coffee and tiramisu before asking her about the grisly details of her work in the lab.


CA: Can you leave us with a quote, a place, or a concept from a book that inspired you?

SN: “Words are, of course, the most powerful drug used by mankind.” Rudyard Kipling, 1865-1936


Sandra was kind enough to share an excerpt from DARK DEEDS. In the novel, Megan Scott and Michael Elliott book a cabin at their friends’ lakeside resort. On the drive there, Megan notices a white feather on the dashboard and tucks it in her handbag, not giving it a second thought.


The discovery of a surprise corpse at the resort alters their relaxing plans and casts an ominous mood on their visit. While waiting for the police investigation to identity the corpse, Megan visits a palm reader: 

Madame Ora stood five feet tall and wore a red polka dot wrap dress that resembled something I’d once seen in a 1940's movie. Her wispy white hair stood on end and looked as if it had gone through dozens of perms. She beckoned me into a tiny room at the rear. A thick curtain separated it from the rest of the shop. Without a word, she motioned for me to sit down at a round café table and took a seat opposite me.

“Please do not ask me any questions until I have completed my reading.” Her voice was thick with a foreign accent—maybe Polish. She closed her eyes and mumbled words I couldn’t understand, then opened her eyes. “Please show me your hands.”

I extended both hands.

Madame Ora peered at my palms, squinting as if she were trying to decipher coded messages. “My dear, you have suffered a deep loss, but things will change for the better.”

It was a pretty general statement.

“Your loss had to do with a man—a man who shared a deep bond with you.”

My late husband. Good guess.

“This man died suddenly and tragically.”

Okay, this was getting creepy.

“You have since moved on. Another man has entered your life. He is a very brave man.”

I swallowed hard.

Madame Ora continued. “On this particular journey, you are in grave danger, but you are surrounded by protection.”

Grave danger? Protection?

She looked up at me, her eyes staring at the space above my head. “The white feather will protect you. Keep it with you at all times.”

Goose bumps rose along my arms. While she closed her eyes and mumbled the same incoherent words as before, I reached into my handbag and rubbed the tiny white feather between my thumb and forefinger. It seemed beyond coincidental.

Madame Ora opened her eyes. “You may now ask me two questions.”

My practical side told me the simple white feather in my handbag would never protect me from any kind of danger. Regardless, the fact she had mentioned it intrigued me. “Can you be more specific about the grave danger you mentioned?”

She closed her eyes. “You are involved in matters concerning death. I see three dead spirits around you—spirits that have met with unexpected death. Take caution. Not everyone is to be trusted.” She opened her eyes. “Next question.”

Was she kidding? A dozen questions had popped into my head.

I thought of Michael. “Will the man in my life be safe too?”

“He has tempted fate many times and succeeded.”

“What you mean?”

Madame Ora pushed back her chair and rose. “I’m sorry, I have already answered your two questions.”

“B-but that’s not an answer.” I stood. “You didn’t say he would be safe.”

For more about Sandra and her terrific Megan Scott/Michael Elliott series, check out:




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When mystery author Robert B. Parker passed away, I mourned the end of the Spenser and Jesse Stone mystery series, as well as his Westerns featuring the enigmatic Virgil Cole.

Like many others, I was of two minds when it was announced that Parker’s novel franchises would continue but be written by other authors. Excitement over additional books with favorite characters, doubt that others could capture the style that made Parker’s books so successful.

Ace Atkins took up the Spenser series and really delivered, even as he introduced a new character (Sixkill) who helped expand Spenser’s world. The dialogue still drives the narrative, the pace is still swift, Spenser’s code is still in tact, and Susan and Hawk are still at his side. For the most part, the transfer of authorship has been seamless.

The Jesse Stone series was always a distant second to Spenser in my reading affections, despite the movies starring Tom Selleck, and I didn’t keep up as the series grew under new authorship. Parker wrote 9 novels about the ex-minor league shortstop who washed out of the Los Angles Police Department because of his drinking and ends up as the chief of police in Paradise, Massachusetts. After Parker’s death, the franchise was handed off to Michael Brandman, who wrote 3 novels, and then to Reed Farrell Coleman who has also written 3.

Has Jesse Stone’s road been as smooth as Spenser’s?

To decide for myself, I read two early Jesse Stone novels, TROUBLE IN PARADISE and STONE COLD, then the last two in the series, THE DEVIL WINS and DEBT TO PAY, both by Coleman.

Here’s my verdict:

The new books spend more time inside Jesse’s head as he remains absorbed by his relationship with alcohol, his ex-wife Jenn, and his missed chance to be the world’s greatest shortstop. Jesse still talks to his picture of baseball great Ozzie Smith. Dix the therapist is back, too, both in Jesse’s thoughts and in scenes in which the two men discuss Jesse’s problems.

In early books Jesse has a number of female friends with benefits; in the later books he’s faithful to Diana, a former FBI agent now a security consultant in Boston. But there’s a precipice beckoning to Jesse in the form of the new Paradise medical examiner. Tamara is an attractive woman with her own drinking problem. I sense an undercurrent of doubt that Jesse can continue to resist this doubly fatal mix of woman and drink. If you are not tired of alcoholic main characters in mystery novels, then the tension is grand.

For those who remember Spenser’s run-ins across several books with the Gray Man, Coleman has introduced a similarly continuing bad guy named Mr. Peepers. I’m not sure why Mr. Peepers has spent the last 20 years carrying out a sick agenda of murder and torture, which would help the believability angle, but he’s a worthy opponent.

Two things stand out as significant differences between early and later Jesse Stone novels. First, Coleman has departed from Parker’s staccato pace, except in some dialogue scenes where Jesse does his rtademark man-of-few-words act. Overall, the pacing is slower and the paragraphs much longer.

Indeed, in THE DEVIL WINS, the normally laconic Jesse delivers a 1.5 page paragraph explanation of how he caught the bad guy. In DEBT TO PAY, we're inside Jesse's angst in nearly every chapter and action scenes are interrupted by explanations of why Jesse is or isn't going to do something. Despite some chunky paragraphs, the prose works well, although a few awkwardly phrased sentences stand out. The villain’s voice is heard at pivotal moments, the same as when Parker was writing.

Second, there is the assumption that the reader knows the entire series’ backstory. For example, in THE DEVIL WINS, references are made to a person named Crow. This villain appeared in the early STONE COLD, but he and Jesse did not meet. But some 10 books later, it is obvious that both Jesse and Paradise cop Molly Crane have had a previous interaction with Crow. Alas, we don’t know the context or who Crow is. I’ll have to read more of the post-Parker books to find out.

Bottom line is that Jesse Stone is one of mystery fiction’s most complex, irritating, and heroic characters. Coleman has both captured and expanded this persona, while creating villain-based plots that manipulate Jesse’s flaws to good effect. A bit more editorial discipline would help, but like Jesse, perfection isn't why I'm reading them.

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After reading the excerpt of the 5th Detective Emilia Cruz novel, PACIFIC REAPER, tucked in the back of the Kindle version of KING PESO, Linda M. asked when will PACIFIC REAPER be released? 

The target release for PACIFIC REAPER is late February 2017. Emilia is caught in the middle when rival drug cartels use the Mexican folk saint Santa Muerte to ignite a range war.

Thanks for asking!


That's all for this edition of Mystery Ahead! 

Thank you for sharing this great adventure with me.

Until next time, keep reading and keep exploring the mystery ahead :)

All the best, Carmen

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