Three Surefire Ways to Make Your Writing Come Alive
by L. Diane Parker
It's happened to all of us at some point. You work really
hard on a piece of writing, and yet, you know in your
heart, it lacks that special something. It's correct. It's
logical. But it's a little dull despite your best efforts
to breathe life into it. Whether it's a short story, a
chapter of your novel, an article, or a class assignment,
here are three ways to turn okay writing into sensational
1. Include some figurative language. Create a
simile or two, a metaphor, some imagery. Appeal to the
reader's senses, and weave a magic spell to captivate your
audience. Remember, whatever devices you choose need to be
handled with care and precision. Avoid clichés.
2. Watch your sentence variety. If your prose
sounds choppy, you may have too many short, simple sentences.
Try combining two or three. Use a semi colon if it suits
your purpose. Add a short, punchy sentence in just the
right place. It'll stop the reader. You will underscore
your point. If reading your piece out loud leaves you
breathless, you may have run on sentences. Divide and
3. Choose your words carefully. Bigger isn't
always better. Again, be precise. What exactly were you
trying to say in the first place? Reevaluate to see if you
have achieved your original purpose. And be vivid. Use
your thesaurus to get ideas.
Finally, when you think it's perfect, put your writing
aside -- for an hour, a day, a week. Return to it with a
fresh perspective. Give it one last polish, and you may
discover you've got a real gem. Be proud. You deserve it!
L. Diane Parker published her first poem at age twelve.
She has taught writing in the Parkway School District in
a suburb of St. Louis, Missouri for twenty years. Her
poems and essays have appeared in St. Louis area
publications, Washington University in St. Louis Magazine,
and Touchstone. She is a former fiction editor at River
Styx, a literary magazine. She is at work on a novel and
a collection of essays.
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